Monday, October 31, 2011

Week 5














Everything speaks. –James Joyce








Good day to you all. I hope you had a nice weekend. 

     Today we will review the summary piece assigned last week, including your
use of quotations.  
     We will focus as well on verb tense use, in ways I hope will make the proper tense 
choice, simple past or present perfect, for example, clearer, including use of the 
subjunctive and conditional verb tenses.


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 Essay 4 is due today.  You had a choice:  (1) to analyze the cause(s) or effect(s) of 
some phenomenon, situation, or action;  or (2) to describe the process by which something occurs 
or is done.  Whether you choose option one or two, you should have a clear purpose and central 
idea,  and clear supporting points in the body paragraph(s).

Below I have listed topics that lend themselves to the means of development indicated above.

Cause/Effect Mode                                                     Process Mode

* Stress/disease                                                           *Staying focused/motivated
* Addiction                                                                 *Eating Right
* Laughter                                                                  *Building a Portfolio
* Loneliness/friendship                                               *1-2-3 of Happiness/Health

Revision/Editing Reminders:

Key to writing the instructional or "How To" essay is to have a plan and a structure and to use clear transitions
words that maintain the coherence of time (now, then, later, before, after, finally, while)
and order (first, next, while, after, second, etc.), and so on.  You must also remember to 
fashion an engaging introductory paragraph to elicit interest and convey the significance
of your subject.

Exploring causes or effects often involves relating the reasons one thing or another is 
happening; first or major causes, if known, should be presented as such and lesser 
contributors presented as minor, marginal, or indirect.  Prioritize so that you isolate the most
important causes or effects relevant to the essay's purpose.  You may want to explore
an indirect effect, for example, of no longer being able to use the credit card (maxed out).
Or show, having got oneself into debt, how one can get out of debt and reap certain rewards, such
as time to think and relax and develop a do-it-yourself attitude without feeling compelled to 
buy anything.
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  After break we will focus as well on verb tense use, in ways I hope will make the proper tense 
choice, simple past or present perfect, for example, clearer, including use of the 
subjunctive and conditional verb tenses.  

   

Essay 5:  In 350-500 words you are to explore a hypothetical scenario, that is, one that 
never actually existed, in terms of its effects on your past, present, and future.  This essay
will require you reference both the past, present, and future tense.   In doing so, you will necessarily
use the subjunctive mood and conditional (modal) tense forms.  
Imagine that you had been born under or into circumstances other than those you were born into;
for example, a different place and/or historical era, a different family, a different body (or species), 
and so on.  Describe what your childhood was actually like, and what it might have been like (under 
the changed circumstances); what your present life might be like (as opposed to what is actually
 happening);and what you imagine happening in your future, actually or hypothetically.

*Title the essay.  Proofread it to make sure you have a clear central idea and adequate support. 
Edit your sentences for clarity of expression and grammatical correctness.

     You might start in this way:  Had I been born an only child, instead of being born the fifth child 
of six, I might have got more attention than I did.  I might have been spoiled!  My parents,
particularly my mother, had little time and attention to spare, afterall . . .

   













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